All Comments on 'A Shot in the Park'

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soclosesocloseover 10 years ago

I would love to read more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more please..more

please don't stop that story there.. its to hot

aisielynnaisielynnover 10 years ago

Wow! So hot! i'd love to be that soccer mom.. *grins with a slight blush* Please follow this story up with what happens when she visits His studio. Keep up the wonderful writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
the shit-for-brains photographer.....

....forgot to leave her his address....!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Hot hot hot. Was so disappointed that I didn't find more work from you. Please write more!

kensimoorekensimoore3 months ago

Love the story, very hot!! Thanks for writing.

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