All Comments on 'A Shy Teen Goes Too Deep Ch. 01-03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What did I miss? Where's the "Non-consent/Reluctance" in this? 🤔🤨

"Lesbian", "Toys and Masturbation", "Exhibition" or even "Anal" would've been more applicable to this than Nc/R... 😲🙄

heavyandhornyheavyandhornyalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Considering someone unknown was messaging her I thought at least "reluctance" made sense. The other categories you discussed were talked about but not really done. Regardless the story changes going forward and won't be in this category anyway.

heavyandhornyheavyandhornyalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Chapter 4 is already on my Patreon if interested.

MasterBlogmanMasterBlogmanalmost 3 years ago

As advertised, it's starting out fairly slow, but I can certainly see where it's going. I thought it might turn into a blackmail story. It still might, but I don't think so.

billie34cbillie34calmost 3 years ago

I need more of this, mainly because I don’t think unknown is Mia, I think Mia was blackmailed into sending someone else that photo.

Stevewu609Stevewu609almost 3 years ago

Wait, so what kind of story is it? I feel like this category is appropriate if that's where the story is going. And I assumed it was going to be kind of a blackmail-type story. So I was fine with the vague intro of it starting tame but getting more extreme. Ok, the blackmail tasks will get more extreme. I'm ok with not knowing more than that right now.

But you say its going in a different direction and won't be in this category. Now, Chapter 4 seems to raise more questions than it answers about what kind of story this will be (although it does seem to mostly rule out blackmail). It'd be nice if you could give us a general idea of what kind of story it is. It's tame now but will get more extreme. Ok, but more extreme in what general way? Exhibitionist? Lesbian? BDSM? Some other non-con (that isn't blackmail from the lost phone incident)? A bunch of these?

Stevewu609Stevewu609almost 3 years ago

Also, you tagged this story as "blackmail."

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An update for anyone reading this. I lost all of my previous work and then lost the desire to write. But I'm back writing a little now. I am struggling a little with ideas so if you have some post comments on the stories. I'll read them. Currently working on a new chapter of ...

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