All Comments on 'A Spanking'

by pedro55

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good, but...

...needs an editor. It's "principal," not "principle." "Vise," not "vice." Don't merely toss these stories off, but proofread them with a sharp eye for details. Otherwise, the errors spoil what otherwise is a fine story.

MJMsPussycatMJMsPussycatover 8 years ago
Great BUT!!!!

Use a spellcheck before You post Your next story. It was a great story and I loved it but Your miss spelled words was not so much fun reading.

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