All Comments on 'A Submissive Lady Joins a Couple'

Nicely crafted, wordsmith....

Really enjoyed it all. Very hot!

Great story. Keep writing please.

Others have said it and I can only add that this was an awesome read, I totally enjoyed it's full on energy and passion, I didn't see the ending coming and loved it, your style allowed it to rise and rise to the very end, well done and yes more please

Jean

You just need an editor to iron out the grammar and spelling. Other than that, good ideas and very horny!! I will read pt. 2 tomorrow.

Nice content, but the constant grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors are so very distracting. You even mixed up Jenn and Jewel a couple times. Your story line is there, but just be sure to edit before you post and it will improve the story quite a bit! Cheers

Amazing- wish I was there!

Super hot story! I enjoyed it completely. But you have some grammatical errors that need fixing.

Really enjoyed the hot sexy action and the characters. I'd love to hear more about Jack, Jenn and Jewel's new living arrangements. The only thing that distracts from the story at all is some of the spelling mix-ups. A proofreader or editor would have really helped. There's a big visual difference for the reader between " her pussy was jutting out" and " her pussy was gutting out" Those little things kept you from getting 5 stars, but it was a great, sexy story. Please keep sharing your hot stories with the rest of us.