All Comments on 'A Summer of Slow Transition Ch. 03'

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ChrispeChrispeover 9 years ago
Love It

I love the series so far, well written and very erotic.

Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Terrific!

Oh yeah, keep them coming. One of the best stories ever on Literotica. Well done!

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 9 years ago
I really like this story...

I love the pace of the building tension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Story

Can't wait to see to what Pam does with the two older guys, great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
We will be watching for more :-)

Wonderful series, very well written, and very exciting as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
LOVING THIS STORY

Keep this thing rolling along for us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Too bad

This was not told as it happened. Would have been even more exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
second -hand narrative

I don't know; I rather liked the way you had Pam tell Bob what happened. It would have been good to hear how Charlie described the morning's events, too.

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