All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Paramours Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Delicious story

with excellent pacing and steamy parts. I can't wait for part two with Jessi and more Jessika-with-a-K.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
WONDERFUL

I like college stories, older man with younger girl, the girl likes sex and expresses it, guy wants the girl's pleasure, and so this one did it for me.

Also very well written (especially for Literotica), relying on dialog to tell the story (rather than narration).

5 stars. With lots to look forward to. (Churchill said, A preposition is not a good word to end a sentence with).

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

fun. excessive use of unnecessary "of". also, disgusting "off of" here and there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolutely fucking wonderful, red hot fucking. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

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