All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Wives'

by Ashson

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sorin61sorin61almost 5 years ago
Nice story

Really entertaining. I don't understand the low star rating this story got untul now. If anything is wrong about it, it's too short for the potential it had. Five stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I would guess you wrote this last night

Just the night before your 13th birthday. And under the blanket, while hiding from mom's prying eyes.

Not one thought about destroying marriages or any consequences, as usual.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
jesus fuck dude

You’re getting worse.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fantasy for sure

I thought since he was really threatening rape they were going to lure him inside and somehow get him. I didn't think he would actually have sex with two married women and what looks to be a promise of more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
The return of the rapist.

Ashson never saw a woman he didn't want to rape.

KingBandorKingBandoralmost 5 years ago
Seemed very familiar

There was another story very similar to this recently in which a guy used the fake rape ploy of "i an bigger than you and you could not fight me off" wink wink.

Only this has two wives.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
WTF

Where are those four star stories, seems all we get anymore is this garbage. ONE STAR

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 5 years ago
Meh

I don't care if he is bigger, there are two of them, one could have picked up the rolling pin while he attacked the other.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Do you have anything else?

Rape this one, rape that one, rape everything in sight. Lousy story. Stop posting or get a new idea.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Gave you five stars

Just to piss off the haters. Your stories are fantasies and as a teenage virgin I used them to get myself revved up when jerking off.

I enjoy them as they bring back good memories.

R.

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyalmost 5 years ago
Nice fantasy

This is just a fantasy and enjoyable to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What a writer's dream. You're a jackoff inspiration.

For jackoff's. It fits.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Only

Only a teenager virgin would get off on a story of implied rape.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Ashon, the wannabe rapist

Two stars, only because of effort.

bruce22bruce22almost 5 years ago
Sounds like Chaucer

They never said no and I am sure that Denise will be waiting for him tomorrow.

jsh1138jsh1138almost 5 years ago
I appreciate your work rate

But try not to have your 18 year old characters talk like worldly and well-read 60 year olds.

racfguyracfguyabout 3 years ago

What did I think of this story? Not much. Steve is an arrogant asshole.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaosabout 3 years ago

I didn't really like the dude honestly. Also, they teased him, it would have been poetic if he didn't put muscle behind it but teased them instead :P

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