All Comments on 'A Thousand Bucks Ch. 01'

This story is five chapters long and all have been submitted. I did put them each in the appropreate categories. Hopefully a new chapter will be posted each day,

Thank you for all your comments on my stories. It's one of the things that keep me writing.

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DG Hear

A fun read. Thanks for the story

This does seem like a fairly superficial story, without strong characterizations in this first chapter. Perhaps something interesting will happen later on.

This story shows similar dark picture as Misterstan's story "Seven Facts About Your Wife". A dark story may be interesting against their picture. A child from a fragile family can become a cynic member of the sociaty. Good story I understand you well Author.

I have read the 3d chapter and it is good story. He comes back from the cynism to the normal people group, however a beautiful damsel in distress with a half orphan baby will assist the turn....... This is a true Christmass story from one of the best Authors in the Lit and in the SOL.

Evidently I either missed this series or have read it and forgot. Either way, I like nearly all your stories. I remember one that I didn't like but don't remember it. Please keep writing.

Actually he is despicable. But the story does make it's point. Sadly, it the world we live in, EVERYTHING is for sale, and first on the block are peoples morals. People will do ANYTHING for a fer measly bucks. Just the other day, I heard about an 18 year old girl, on holiday and partying in Spain, that gave TWENTY FOUR guys blowjobs, in a crowded nightclub, while everyone was recording video. And what was her prize? A single free drink at the bar, worth $5.

I think the guy in the story is wasting his money! People are FAR cheaper than he thinks!

DGnis an excellent writer; this story is yet another interesting read.

1. Unk Sam took 50% of the $5M (death tax)

2. 35 bought GFs/wives = $3.5M

3. Our hero has no money to continue his BS dating into a Ch. 02.

maybe i am missing something Annony but isn't 30 times at 1000 dollars a pop 30,000 dollars? .... Not sure about the tax point as I am not an accountant but I don't remember having to give half of my 200k inheritance to taxes .....

5 million is tax free. 35 fuck is 35 k he didn't even make it a 100 k he still has 5 million plus what ever interest he got his n his money.

I am drawn to scenarios where a guy pays for sex. This reminds me of one in which a guy got sex for fixing her car. In another he traded pool maintenance for sex. In this present tale, Jerrod does not pay $1000 to prostitutes, but does something more intriguing -- sees how many "normal" people will give up sex for $1000. Jerrod is a "nice guy" who sees someone with needs and offers to help them out with $1000. He also is a nice guy because he does not coerce or pressure them, giving the gal a chance to back out at the last moment. Maybe Jarrod should distribute business cards (for the gym, of course), so that his satisfied clients could refer to him their friends who need $1000. Hey, I know this might not work in the real world, but in the world of Literotica this is a captivating plot line. Could have spent more time on each individual encounter, going more than once and giving the gal more time to express her pleasure and satisfaction.

Adding the great writing and storytelling easily makes this a 5 star story.

Paul in Oklahoma

PS. This story reminds me of the joke about the guy sitting next to an attractive woman at the bar. He asks her, "if that well-dressed gentleman over there offered you a million dollars, would you have sex with him?"

She replies, "I suppose I would."

Presently in comes a man looking like a bedraggled, homeless street person. The man at the bar asks the women, "if that guy offered you $40, would you have sex with him?"

She bristles, "what kind of woman do you think I am?"

He replies, "I already know what kind of woman you are. I just want to know what your price is."

We will soon see.

The author has a good imagination. I like the sex. It’s very hot to see a woman’s personality change. It’s interesting how he used sex for good. A little follow up about what happens to the couples would be nice for the reader.

Love the storyline, very imaginative on the part of the author and very interesting, most certainly different from most stories. It is amazing what a couple will do for money, especially when it comes to sex for money. Well done 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

No real man would ever sell/ prostitute his girlfriend/wife for any amount of money!!!!

What a worthless preditory scumbag of an MC. Surprised he didn't fly to somewhere like Haiti and pretend to be an aid worker so he could have sex with little kids.