All Comments on 'A Transforming Trip Ch. 01'

I know from talking to my friends that they hate the word cunt. You might want to use a substitute. Otherwise I'm really looking forward to the sequel. Steve

Unlike the vast majority of crap on this site, this story is not over the top--the shy woman becoming slut of the year in ten minutes. Instead, it's something that I can easily see happening (and have) with many women I've known. Most writers here don't seem to realize that a small step of exhibitionism for a reserved woman or inexperienced couple is a big leap for them.

Were she even a little more hesitant or tentative ("I can't believe I'm doing this."), it might be more true to life.

Stay slow and tease us for a long time. Don't have a balcony gang bang in the next act.

Thanks.

Although we still don't know the 'bloke's' name, Claire has certainly grabbed my attention. It's fun to find Claire taking the lead when hubby thought she was the conservative one. I'm looking forward to the new chapters.

Loking forward to reading more, I like your style, but agree with another reader the cruder words should be kept for moments of high emotion, otherwise GREAT|

Damn how i hate it when the man out of the blue turns into a balless slave. Except he is no longer a MAN. Atleast state in the beginning that its a little boy and his wife that moves to france