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All Comments on 'A Tryst in the Tub'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You need to learn the art of the. . .

. . .multi-sentence paragraph. The story was too choppy to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Story! I want to know more!

but i agree it was hard to read at times. Keep trying XD you can get it puurrrrrrfect!

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