All Comments on 'A Very Private Beach Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fort Bragg at the beach?

I'm confused about how you get Fort Bragg near a beach unless you're talking about a lake. Have you been to Fayetteville NC? It's quite a ways from the sea shore.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

To Anonymous: You're right, there is a Ft. Bragg in NC. There is also a Ft. Bragg on the coast in California, north of San Francisco.

Jehoram: I liked the story. Hope to see more! I gave it a 5!

mcollectmcollectalmost 12 years ago
Great beginning

This must continue! Please 5*

William smythWilliam smythalmost 12 years ago
To anonymous

I guess you have never been to Fort Bragg CALIFORNIA nor did you bother to read the introduction to the story.

Fort Bragg is right on the coast. Look it up

ctyankee264ctyankee264almost 12 years ago
Great beginning!

I'm very eager to read more of this storyline, it seems that Liz & Dick are at the beginning of a beautiful friendship! Dick surely is a lucky man!

ErotonautErotonautalmost 12 years ago
What an accommodating young lady

I happily second the call for a follow-up. If this is what Liz will do on a first encounter, the next should be a riot, particularly if the beach gets as steamy as she suggested.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good story

I very much enjoyed your story- you could see yourself doing the same things they were. Please continue

OlingerOlingerabout 10 years ago
Very nice

Very well written. I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Rocks!!!

Dude, your story rocks... hope there is more to cum!

52andnotoverthehill52andnotoverthehillover 7 years ago
Great story!

I'm going to be hitting a few nude beaches in the next few weeks, I hope something like this happens!

I loved your descriptive language, very erotic!

LIDiverLIDiver10 months ago

Wonderful start, we look forward to more.

dschuetz68dschuetz684 months ago

There needs to be more to this,excellent!!

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