All Comments on 'A Week on the Lake Ch. 01'

Love all the combinations and permutations. Well written, too. Can't wait for more.

this is damn fine stuff - I luv stories like this where the boys play too, I luv watching guys suck on one another

I didn't know what the tags or story line was when I chose this, but was totally surprised how turned on it made me. I want more.

With a lovely surprise:) do not miss!*****

Dudes eating other mens semen and sucking their is not what I want read about. Thanks for ruining this the last page and a half. Warning before I started this should be mandatory by the site.

I gladly support anyone's rights to write this, but there should be a special category for this. If you like it, fine but it doesn't belong in Group Sex. The writer likes sucking boner, fine. Just put it in the right category.

Anon,

There could certainly stand to be a sort of "bi-sex" category, sure. And since posting this I usually put a dudes-on-dudes warning right at the top of my stories, so sorry about that. But I'm pretty sure there is way to much guy-girl stuff in this story for the Gay Male category. I mean, it's 90% guy-girl. That doesn't go in Gay Male. Almost every scene is three or more people, so I went with Group Sex. Anyway, I generally put in a warning these days.

Wrong category for gay crap.

Fuck the haters, this is hot.

Like the previous poster said. Gay literotica is A-Ok obviously. Just tag it properly. I expect mmf scenes in Group Sex category so I go to the tags to determine if it's right for me. It sucks to invest in a story (and this is a great story btw) then run into something that just kills the mood.

are f*cked up. this is a group story. period. nothing wrong with bisex along with swapping, 4somes, 5somes, etc. thats what a "group" is. i also think a lot of these complainers are homophobes. but they always read these stories. and then complain. just don't read them!!

I loved it. 5 stars!!! can't wait to read the rest of the series.

You are a great storyteller,

I always find it strange when reading a group sex story where the author makes a real attempt never to have the men interact. It is like they write a group sex story with homophobia tendencies.

Grow up people!! We are all sexual creatures. Let’s enjoy the stories without getting upset by things like this!

This story was one of the first I ever read on this site. It's really one of my big inspirations for writing my own erotica. It's very hot and not without some good character development. Oh and by the way, thanks for the follow and love for my own stories. It really means a lot.

Great story. Do those that object to the gay content also object when a group sex story does not explicitly warn that there may be lesbian sex? Yes, I didn’t think so.

This is such an excellent story!! Loved it.

Absolutely fucking amazing! Cant wait to read the next chapters

Not bad for the odd man out!

3 on 2 is still pretty good odds. Sounds like a great start, I just know Felicia is going to add a whole new dimension to the mix! Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Fucking incredible.

I was pissed at the marine patrol there for a minute, cock blocking, but, ah, I really didn't need to worry about it.