All Comments on 'A Weekend In France'

You have made a tremendous improvement on your last story, graynsam. I enjoyed this story, recognising it for what it was - a work of fiction. Although it is a well used theme, it still read well.

..... that this was an improvement. I liked your first story in spite of the spelling faults. May I remind readers, though, that it is the story we mark on - not the spellings and grammar.

This was well written, and very exciting! You have a gift, sir!