by IsabellaEmily
A fantastic start, a real teaser and I can't wait for the next chapter
This is a gorgeous example if how mundane and "dirty" things get eroticized and turn into kink. Bravo.
This may be the hottest story ive ever read!
Please write more!
I just found this author today… this is a well-written and very erotic story. I do hope that there really is more to come.
There is a follow up to this story, called A Wetter Summer Night.
Two pissing young ladies about to embark on some girl sex in a tent... Nothing about that that I don't like!!! On to chapter 2!!
Just what I like to read. Two girls, pissing fun and the promise of some hot, steamy sex to come. Damn I'm hard now.
Your way with words is very exciting. Even though I’m not a girl I was aroused write a bit. Thank you.