by PrimalRoots
A Literotica story needs sex. This had no sex. Therefore this was a failure.
What a hot start... can’t wait to see if this one goes further, I would love to see more
Seriously impressed not just with the story itself but by your originality overall. Most stories anything close to this are always the guy just screwing anyone and everyone. I can’t wait to see where it goes. Thanks for the story.
Stay safe and be well.
J.D.
I am interested in more, there is a good start to an sexy and erotic story line. Keep it up! Thanks
I really liked this one. Slow burn with a kinda different take on mind control. Ethical mind control maybe? Im commenting before reading the next chapter, hope you keep writing this.
I love and hate this in a very sweet way. God I just want to be wanted, and it’s messed up how I feel that more when reading something supernatural, by nature, impossible, than I do in real life. What is it like to be the center of someone’s desires? Forget multiple people, just to have that kind of grip on one persons heart. God it’s so hot.
Thank you for this feeling.