All Comments on 'A Woman in Hardware Ch. 05'

I like the way u r leading into the three-some. Very original and deliciously perverted.

What an incredibly well written, sexy, erotic and fun story. I keep waiting for the next installment to discover where the author is taking us. It's been a wonderful journey so far.

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I'm enjoying this series quite a bit. Your character development tells me you want to tell a story, not grind out a quick yank tale. One tiny bit of criticism: it takes a month for birth control pills to take full effect. If Jill becoming pregnant is a plot detail, forgive me for being too quick to criticize! Does mom find out Jill is preggers, and confides in Sue? Then does she take a turn herself, falling in love with her son as well? There is a lot of story to read, I certainly look forward to the rest of the tale.