All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 22'

This is a good how to do it story which leaves out few details. That Capon of Mary's would be out of this world....

Thanks for another episode of an engrossing story. This has to be a new one for Lit, how many other stories have gone 22 chapters before the kissing starts yet kept up the great approval rate that it has. very interesting snapshots of country life, and an age gone by for most of us. reminiscent of Brigadoon.

it must not have an impact on the valley

nor can it be seen to compete with James

but it must bring income into the community without disrupting the lifestyle.

You make the characters so real that I really care about them. Will Abby and James find Love? Will Abby find a way to make the Valley more prosperous?

Though I am a crusty old soldier, I love this story, chick lit and all. Get an Agent and get it published.