All Comments on 'Accidental Penetrations Ch. 04'

More!!!

More to this story and others like it.

Thanks😛

After reading the next to last paragraph, I have realized that you have opened up a new story line. You now have to go back and expand on what happened when she was modeling. Was this before or after she married? This brings up lots of possibilities.

Holy crap... this chapter was really great. Keep up the good writing.

Really like it, thanks

Thanks for sharing.

Can't wait for Lily to have her turn.

Excellent writing. Had me hard and wanting more.

Hope we have another EPISODE SOON

Holy shit this is amazing hoping to see more from the story line

Absolutely loved the story! Can’t wait for more parts!

MrIllusion, every story you write is simply perfect. Your approach... the way you describe things... the way you set the mood... and how things unfold... i love this serie... keep going ! 5 stars from me of course!!!

Looking forward to the ball and then the cousins arrive the next day.

The story lines are good...and erotic......but your editing needs to be better. A.F.C. Somerset.

I like the series so far. and this chapter was good, just IMHO not as good as the others. maybe it's all the "accidents" are getting to me. I've read a couple of stories with them before but those are usually a one time thing, the the couple realize the like/love each other and the rest of the story is about how the relationship grows. this story has now had 4 separate ones with 4 different women and with your foreshadowing there are at least 4 more to go. I just hope I don't get burned out before it's over.

In chapter 1 the reason Dustin and Emily had to share a bed was that the other bed was wet and the room didn't have a sofa. Now Dustin's room has a sofa?

Chapter 3 starts out referring to 'Niemira' when it should be Emily, then it transitions into the story of his girlfriend Niemira and her sister. Editing would improve these distractions of detail.

Need a lot better editor.

what a lucky guy. 5 stars

I like your stories but I have no idea why you keep thanking your editor... "Gods"...what kind of word is that? no one uses that.

Your editor is a joke or you are just making up a name. With all the errors I would not want to be thanked for doing such a terrible job on your stories.

He used where she should be used,, not a hard thing to change. The errors just keep coming,, please fix them.

So the mother-fucker finally has his all time accident. Very orgasmic story. But you really have to do something about your editor. Too many errors. Too distracting.