All Comments on 'Adult Costume Party'

by Insatiable_Little_Devil_2003

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pay no attention to the little man's assholery.

Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
i give it 5*

Would of been 4* but the abusive comment below wound me up a tad .why do misogynistic idiots think comments like that are necessary?

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 8 years ago
Meeting at the drunk tank

Not known as a life-changing holiday, this story was a first for me. It's interesting that two lovers met because they had to sleep off their inebriation in a drunk tank.

Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent story.

I loved this story. Everything flowed smoothly and constantly. I found myself seeing what this woman was experiencing. And when she found her friend and developed a relationship, I could sense what she was feeling. Excellent writing. Keep up the great work..

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The love of her life

Do you think they had a backstory made up whenever someone asked where they met? Not ready the stuff dreams are made of, meeting in the drunk tank.

EosAuroraEosAuroraover 8 years ago

I really enjoyed this one, especially how the relationship developed. It was well written and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice

very erotic and very romantic. gay haters can go elsewhere. love knows no gender here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You never introduce yourself!! Are you a male or female? Is this gay sex - why must the reader try to figure this out. Other gaps too - waste of time to read

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