by Insatiable_Little_Devil_2003
Would of been 4* but the abusive comment below wound me up a tad .why do misogynistic idiots think comments like that are necessary?
Not known as a life-changing holiday, this story was a first for me. It's interesting that two lovers met because they had to sleep off their inebriation in a drunk tank.
Good luck in the contest.
I loved this story. Everything flowed smoothly and constantly. I found myself seeing what this woman was experiencing. And when she found her friend and developed a relationship, I could sense what she was feeling. Excellent writing. Keep up the great work..
Do you think they had a backstory made up whenever someone asked where they met? Not ready the stuff dreams are made of, meeting in the drunk tank.
I really enjoyed this one, especially how the relationship developed. It was well written and fun.
very erotic and very romantic. gay haters can go elsewhere. love knows no gender here.
You never introduce yourself!! Are you a male or female? Is this gay sex - why must the reader try to figure this out. Other gaps too - waste of time to read