All Comments on 'Adventures of a Pakistani Wife Ch. 05'

by Jogi Bahadur

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
You could write better...

Jeez man, you could have write a better story than this. This is short and not at all exciting. Remove it fron literotica. Rewrite it again. You are a better writer. Dont waste the ending like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I have to agree

Buildup was great but this was anticlimactic

shang40shang40over 10 years ago
best hot but little error

The training and getting more cocks by kulsoom is nicce.

Error in text is - its not organism. It is orgasm of lady when she cums.:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
good time by all

Good story,maybe more of father in law & mother in law in four somes with the newly weds,and daughter pregnant at some point.good times keeping it in the family.

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