All Comments on 'Adventures of Sarah Ch. 03'

by teachgirl1980

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Falling asleep

are you ever going to get to the meat of the matter or just drag this out until christmas.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
boring, kick it up a notch

Less haiku- more Mailer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Excellent buildup

The ebb and flow of your stories, the development of the characters, the details....you're good

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