All Comments on 'Alana's Hotwife Adventures Pt. 02'

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swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Repetitive

Boy, the repetitive nature of the dialog became tedious in a hurry.

"Do you want to see me suck a big dick?"

"Yes, I want to see you suck a big dick."

"Do you want to suck a big dick, too?"

"Yes, I want to suck a big dick, too."

I couldn't make it past that. I mentioned before that this story is in the wrong category. The main focus of this story is Dom/sub, not husband/wife. It's not my cup of tea, so I'm not going to rate it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh, come on aiuthor..

Get real! Standard LW sorry post.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
Still 3*...

Still all in agreement and no lack of respect...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Love the elements where she takes control. Can't wait for him to service his wife's lovers

deadonedeadoneover 9 years ago
You say Hot wife

Everybody hears WACC

But in reality GAY WACC.

patilliepatillieover 9 years ago
You know he is going to end up sucking cock and taking it up the arse

I wonder about cucks, they just didnt get the full load of testosterone at birth

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Just cannot wrap my mind around a man allowing himself to be abused like that. He should turn it around and start to dominate her so she knows how it feels to be abused. Just dump the pig no one else would put up with her

1LuckyRob1LuckyRobover 9 years ago
Keep it going!

We loved the story and the series as well! Keep it going and never mind the naysayers. My wife and I have been in the hot wife lifestyle now for almost eight years and it is wonderful for us, its made our marriage so much stronger and fun too. My wife goes out with whoever she wants whenever she wants and always brings home a wonderful surprise for me when she comes home so I certainly can understand how Matt feels in your story. Well Done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
First chapter was ok but..

this one is turning gay. next chapter should be in the gay section. No loving wife here. and just a faggot husband. pathetic!

dirtyomandirtyomanover 9 years ago
I liked #1

This was a very hot story, but got a bite confusing. Why didn't Alana let her man fuck the littleone?? I mean everyone but him got lots of pussy. Ok so he got to eat a bit that ain't like slippin ya cock into the other guys wife. He prepped her, got her nice & ready.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
Agree with @dirtyoman...

They were two couples...he was the only one who didn't fuck...He liked it, but it's sad hear his wife say she loved him and then treat him differently...First story was better than this in this aspect of her love for him...But some time has passed and her love and respect must have desappear...

devilspydevilspyover 9 years ago
Pretty darn good.

I would have made cuckold suck Kurt's cock, swallow his load. Start his cock sucking training. Maybe let the women use a strap on in his tight cuckold ass/pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
PLEASE NO GAY

I realize an author can write whatever they want - but perhaps the reader does not want anything gay either. I just about lost all interest & totally spoiled the mood to say the least.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 7 years ago
Sry well written

Hot story and talented author. Thanks for sharing and keep writing

BiAussieCuckoldBiAussieCuckoldalmost 5 years ago
Very HOT

Loving this story very much , thankyou

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
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All these commenters talking about their whorewives. Who knew that many brain damaged idiots read these stories.

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