All Comments on 'All About Zack Ch. 03'

by SylviaG

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
slow story

The story is way to slow, if it is a sex slave she is turning into, then push the tempo and humiliation. Have her pierced and tattooed to permanently show her submission to zack, and have a no holes bared fuck video put on the internet to publicly exposing her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Sylvia? Funny name for a creep who writes this

crap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nasty!

Married woman being controlled by a devious, little punk. Huge turn-on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Personally

I see this as pure fantasy and except for the interracial really enjoyed it. Looking for the rest, Thanks!

goamz86goamz86almost 16 years ago
get to it

I enjoy a build up, but damn, Get to it. It's been three chapters and they haven't even fucked. Come on!!!

WeAreElevenWeAreElevenabout 9 years ago
Oh the ending

That last part is so sweet and sexy how he spoke to her. Bravo!!

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