All Comments on 'Ally Ch. 01'

mmm, what a great story. hopefull there will be more to cum. i daydream about these things happening. add more chapters to ths please!

Great Story! Do you plan on continuing? WOuld love to read more about Ally, Eve & JOhn. THanks.

nikki I wanted to see what Ally would do to her boss? My partner was Alice, and was called Ally. She was a sexy one, but not as uninhibited as your character. Are you writing out of experience? You seem to know all the right things to write about. As you are in the early 20's,I'm just curious as to how u know so much about sexual responses. Just curious, that's all. Your ability to express yourself is amazing. I want to read more about Ally in a while.

sweet will be fun to follow this through, I do find it hard to believe Eve never touched her self I think every one explores there own body a little no? Thanks I will be reading hope you keep writing nikki I always love your work.

your stories are always so infectious,fresh and new,,,i know your age range and its fun to see the way you put words on paper in your young vital way!!

i love that your female characters are bi or bi curious as many young ladies today seem to be,,

HOTHOTHOT! Keep 'em cumin'!

I agree, more of this story. Awesome story. Well written. Makes me want to read the next chapter where Ally teaches Eve to suck John's cock. Great scenario. Love it.