by glossophile
Utter lack of any realism in the setting or in how most characters act. Main char is a total Mary Sue, and I couldn't even get past page 2.
Perhaps I should add the suffix "a fantasy" to the titles of my stories so seekers of "realism" can move on.
Good story from the only user on Literotica to really scratch this specific itch. Not a big fan of the castration elements but a huge fan of the cougar mistress with harem of younger slaves locked in chastity, and her having threesomes every day.
Actually I think this could have been even more fun if it had scenes of her using four-five slaves instead of just two at a time, but without diverging into straight up gay territory. Anyway that's just a minor suggestion from me, overall these stories are very erotic and hot, and I really like how the womans pleasure is completely in the center, and that she is older too. I look forward to your next story!