All Comments on 'Amateur Photographer Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

HOT HOT HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very nice start !

An interesting beginning - can be the start of a very hot saga.

Please continue - soonest ! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I loved it...

Very good build up and tease. Thanks.......Slickman

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very realistic

Very nicely written and very realistic.

aNAUGHTYgranny4uaNAUGHTYgranny4uover 18 years ago
Very Erotic

Loved your story, it was very accurate. I am a erotic photographer's model and I could very well see myself posing for this photographer -- you painted a lot of very erotic scenes with your words and left me wishing it was you I was posing for. I don't get nearly what this photographer was paying -- maybe I should raise my rates LOL. Keep up the good work in the following chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
sitting with baited breath

I just downed my glass of scotch trying to wet my dry lips. I can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great intro

Looking forward to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
MORE Damnit!

Great story...I'll look for chapter 2 TOMORROW! Thank you.

SamFrenchSamFrenchalmost 17 years ago
great stuff

love this story. can't wait to read all your stuff.

evilspikeevilspikealmost 13 years ago
not bad

This story shows promise. It was engaging. Also, it's good that you didn't just jump into the sex.

desire30desire30almost 2 years ago

wonderful story so far . I well intended photographer that did not push. I trusting student becoming relaxed but still innocent in her actions. love the beginning

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Excellent, loved how the model poses and actually teases him….and then asks for more. I can’t wait for the next chapter

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What can I say, other than I am really just your average warm-hearted nice guy. I do have an active imagination, and sometimes stories spring from it - some of which are on here. I think the old cliche 'sex is all in the mind' has a literal truth to it (otherwise these chat ro...

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