All Comments on 'Amateur Photographer Ch. 03'

Because this scene has been written so many hundreds of times, the author needs to become a lot more creative than what is expressed in this effort. Please don't keep this 'old song' going, heard it way too many times before. Or maybe make it easy on yourself, and simply copy one of the thousands of other versions of this same tale and resubmit it as your own. Then again, maybe that's what you've already done.

I have also read a lot of these "vanity photo shoot leads to sex with photographer" stories, and this one is taking its own teasing direction.

Have they had (real "Clinton-esque") sex yet, in two installments? No, they have not!

It's a delectable and tantalizing tease, and we've also got a little mystery going in the background about Sara's personality, and her "coming out" to her hot self.

Sure, it ain't Proust, but it ain't bad either.

I don't understand how anyone could give this story a score of 00. I agree with Seattle. I loved the slow build up of erotic tension. I look forward to more submissions from davidwriter.

i am really looking forward to the next shooot

Amazing teasing story, can't wait for part 4!

Well written, nice build up! I hope you follow up with more chapters.

You called this "boring"? I'm floored! Sure, it may not be the most original piece, but in terms or reading enjoyability, this story ranks among the top on this website, for good reason! I would very honestly like you to point me to a story that's NOT boring to you! I've yet to read a hotter story, I can only hope this author keeps up the amazing work.

This story is amazing! I love the balance between story line and sexual content. Perfect! It left me wet, breathless, and aching for more. Thanks!

The build of this story is absolutely PERFECT! Keep on keeping on.

Thanks for taking the time an patience to put this down, you are very good with works

Nice build up. Not quick like a lot of these stories.

I really admire your writing!

asianToy

The only thing that could have made it better would have been a few illustrations.

Well worth more than 5 Stars!

Rapier