All Comments on 'Amateur Photographer Ch. 04'

and very interesting. Kate is quite a character. An attitude that is as jarring as her body is appealing. She uses words as if they were hammers to cower David into submissiom. Yet, she puts herself into positions to be used as a display case for cum. Her personality exhibits a dichotomy of aggresion and submission, but only on her own terms.

David seems to have weakened as a character between the first and fourth parts. He is now following the needs of his little head which is doing all of his "thinking". He seems to be aware that he is being led down a garden path filled with thorny bushes yet is unable to stop despite the risks of walking with Kate. One hopes that he will find a backbone during the course of his current excursion.

Sarah was hot but Kate is more interesting.

Thanks for writing. Looking forward to Part 5.

Kate's really hot, but, what a bitch! You need to make her nicer, or, make one with a willing, but submissive woman.

Attractive physically AND, mentally!

Nice change - cant wait to read more

Misstep. Although I don't think it was bad that you introduced a teacher, I don't think that the story was handled in a believable way. It would have made more sense if she remained clothed.