by Neon_Ultra
Hey Neon,
It's awesome that you're updating the series more consistently nowadays. However, this act felt like it was wanting something. The conversation between the mother and Alice was great, and acts as a great lead to an encounter between Alice and her brothers or father, but instead what occurred was a repeat of act 4, and a much shorter rendition at that which just seems to have deferred Alice's encounter with her father. I might personally be biased against this act because I am not a fan of double anal, but I believe that my points stand. For me, this was a little disappointing in comparison to the last act, which I adored, and also commented on. The sex scene was a little short, and felt repetitive. All that being said, I do not want you to think that I am not overjoyed at a new act. I think you should keep writing, and following your own vision. These are just my thoughts, and I hope you appreciate the feedback. Keep it up!
Sincerely, a long-time fan
Really enjoyed this chapter, but I do feel that it was a bit of a repeat of 4 with less 'detail.' That being said, there's only 'so much' you can do with your sisters butt, but I feel a bit more detail like in the previous chapters would really add to the quality.
Still looking forward to future chapters as always.
I see where this is going, and I like it. How soon can we expect the next part?
For the love of god make more chaptors. I must know what happens next! And dont end then yet! Make it last
Is it bad that I imagine myself as Alice when I read your story? I can’t wait for the next chapter
This story is incredible beyond words. I literally ONLY come to this website to see if you've updated the next chapter, and often if I find porn boring I'll come back to re-read the series. Anal Alice is my all-time favorite sexy thing, anywhere, period.
Thanks!
I love these stories, I always imagine myself as alice and nothing brings me to climax more than that. I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapters, maybe a bit of bdsm or maybe she has some cousins or uncles who want to join in?
Please keep this story going, and of course keep her strictly anal only and never use her pussy!
These kind of stories just piss me off and make me wish she just grabbed a knife and either stab them or cut their dicks off and report them to the police. She didnt want them to rape her but they didnt anyways and her own fucking family said rape that rape is okay and its her fault they raped her because she was pretty.
I literally just come back to this website to check if you've posted the next chapter yet!
I am sorry for such a very long wait, and I understand your impatience and the lack of news (I had no news to give for so long, and no news of news).
But I am here to tell you I have just submitted Act 7 and hopefully it will be up soon! I hope you like it, despite the wait.
Thank you for your support and appreciation.
It's finally up!
That did take a while. It was rejected the first time and I had to send it again. I hope you like it. It probably won't live up to expectations after so long unfortunately.
justsomeguy41 - it was rejected because I included a Paypal link if anyone wanted to donate to show support for the stories.
Also, I can't remember if I've already mentioned this elsewhere, but I love your stories!
Ah yeah, they're pretty strict about that stuff, got rejected once for pointing towards my CHYOA account. Still haven't gotten one early Harley Quinn story submitted because dunno what's wrong with it.
Yeah you have, thanks btw, it's especially cool coming from someone whose writing I've enjoyed.