All Comments on 'Anna, the Temptress'

Its a good story with interesting set characters. I am curious about your other stories that you have written as there is nothing else other than this one under your author name.

An amazing first published story! I loved the sexual build up and was aroused throughout. I cant wait for the next chapter and more stories from you. Great job

Enjoyed the story! I think flipping povs would be interesting i hope you make more chapters!

Very interesting and sexy story. I hope you'll continue where the story leads. I'm not a big fan of different points of view. I've seen it done well, but usually it just makes the story choppy and ruins the flow. Specifically, going back and retelling the story from Anna's viewpoint would be boring and a waste of time.

Having knocked up my step daughter twice, let me tell you there is nothing like having a step daughter walk around with her belly swollen in front of your wife. This should happen in this story. Maybe mom gets a bun in the oven too.

It’s a lot of work but maybe you can continue with each point of view. That way we have a choice of which we want to read and see

I think that chapter two is a little late in getting submitted ! What happened , you had it going on ? I liked ch. 1 anyway

Lovely story! Please write more.