All Comments on 'Ann's Awakening'

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topcattoponetopcattoponeover 17 years ago
Ann's emancipation

Loved the story, so often exhibitionism stories are somewhat crude. Please submit more of this couples adventures but please keep the element of elegance that emerged during the telling.

Loved it - looking forward to more.

Topcattopone

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good start but surely Ann has only just started

Well done the storyline stands up reasonably well although I am sure your heroine hasn't finished with her adventures. What happens next???

oldwinooldwinoabout 17 years ago
Great Story

Very hot story. Hope to read more of Ann's adventures. Hopefully nastier in public.

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