All Comments on 'Are You Finished With Me?'
by cungy22
- 18 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoYour story was beleivable and well written-not to mention erotic. Lets see the sequel
Anonymousover 14 years agorealistic and well-written; but it is in the wrong catagory. She said no, that puts it in the nonconsensual catagory. He betrayed his frinedship with a woman who looked past his "nerdiness", he betrayed his relationship with his wife. Hope he likes prison food.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThankyou for sharing your time and talent with us. Enjoyed reading your work and was very real and erotic. I guess you could ask when does no mean yes and yes mean no. The games we play. Thanks again for your talent.
Anonymousover 14 years agoYou enjoy writing about raping someone? Well I guess swingers will do anything for a fuck won't they?
Anonymousover 14 years agoYes, it was erotic, but it belongs in the non consent category, which includes "reluctant." You should not deceive your readers as to the overall content of your story.
katibover 14 years agoRape? Hardly. Sounded like consent to me; or, perhaps, a skillful seduction by a nerd. Excellent up to the very end when you abruptly shifted the mood in a direction that seemed not logical to me. Really enjoyed the initial badinage.
jim2268over 14 years agofantastic story are you finished with me. brilliant writing. so very erotic and exciting. do hope you do another part or parts.
jim2268over 14 years agofantastic story are you finished with me. brilliant writing. so very erotic and exciting. do hope you do another part or parts.
jim2268over 14 years agofantastic story are you finished with me. brilliant writing. so very erotic and exciting. do hope you do another part or parts.
jim2268over 14 years agofantastic story are you finished with me. brilliant writing. so very erotic and exciting. do hope you do another part or parts.
jim2268over 14 years agofantastic story are you finished with me. brilliant writing. so very erotic and exciting. do hope you do another part or parts.
Anonymousover 14 years agoFuck up a marriage and a friendship, like a why not to do this, I already know. But any newbys out there, think long and hard about swinging or swaping, it ain't all roses.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoYou can really write. All your stories are very convincing.
tazz317over 11 years agorevert back with raging hormones and estrogen, TK U MLJ LV NV
Harvey8910over 3 years agoi enjoyed the story but i does belong in the non-consent category. Addi could not believe that Phil would be interested in her because his wife was so desirable. She does not understand her own attractiveness. I did not like the forcing himself on her. I never did that and would never do that. But you are a really good writer and i found the piece very well written and very enjoyable. Good job. I gave it 5 stars even though it was mis-categorized.
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