All Comments on 'Ashley's Bus Ride'

Did anybody get past paragraph 24 where still nothing had happened?

I am going to go walk barefoot on the grass and maybe even ride a bus.

Very exciting Story, kept my interest and got me thinking like her!

This may be the ultimate tease story! Tremendous work!

Long time since I've read a this good! Incredibly sexy!

Ugh, photoman you're a fuckin' wanker go to redtube, geez

brilliant story very cute ;)

This is one of the best entries yet. I have actually done similar things in moments of arousal. At least I can take comfort in knowing that others have similar impulses. Try it for real.

Please make a new ashley story

The main story is great, but the back story seems to just go on and on. It could have been left out completely, and the end result would still be just as awesome

I used to ride the bus every day and never saw an Ashley. Can you supply information as to which route she takes ;)