All Comments on 'At The Movies: The First Hour'

This will be an alright story if the woman and her husband can get revenge....

Taking a woman to a public theater for sex can be very exciting, and I have done this several times. But this story,with its forced sex, is something different, and knowing it was written by a woman makes it more so.

She is a wonderful writer. Her descriptions of the feelings of the particpants,especially a woman being taken against her will but unable to lessen the sexual responses, is one of the best stories in this catagory ever posted here.

Let's hope the second hour is just as hot, and that Dawn continues to write other stories.

Great hot story. Have her wear nylons, garter belt, heels and pleated mini skirt in the next story. She's going to become a cum slut and she would love having cum all over her face and clothes.

Your discriptions are vivid. The story pulls the reader along. The first hour went very quickly. I encourage you to write more, and even in other areas (loving wives, group, etc.). Thank you

Your English is a bit off, but that doesn't matter. The situations and the emotions come through very clearly and very strongly, and it is all very believable. Please hurry with the second hour!

Your English is a bit off, but that doesn't matter. The situations and the emotions come through very clearly and very strongly, and it is all very believable. Please hurry with the second hour!

Great first hour... look forward to the next hours... days.. who knows. : ) keep writing

Loved it. Great story. What happened next!

I love this story! I fell into the role of the married man,the married woman and the force seducer at different times.

Please keep writing stories like this.

Seriousely I loved it that much. The description was awsome. I had to look away from the screen and count from 20 to 0 backwards to stop myself from cumming without even touching my cock.

AWSOME..

Yeah more use of speach marks would be good, and make sure you know when you are in 3rd or 1st person. But man I loved this story.

Loved this story... this slut got what she deserved

the next one should be interesting

VERY GOOD! My pussy was gushing before I even touched it. Maybe it has something to do with this being one of my fantasies? Keep up the good work! You're very descriptive - excellent!

Dont stop writing... its a GREAT story. I came before I could finish reading. I couldnt keep my fingers away from my pussy for a minute.

My sister who is 48 works too hard, no husband, no boy friend, who knows.so when she came to visit i took her to the city,we had dinner, a few too many drinks.Walking past an adult shop, she heads up the stairs,o.k, we look around and she asks the guy at the counter whats in there.Movie theatre, come on Rob she says, you $10, shes free.Dark, we make our way past a few guys and sit, on the screen a big guy getting a blow job.She giggles a bit,my cock gets hard,i see a guy with his cock out, wanking, my sister sees it too, then looks at me.Her hand went to my pants and felt my hard cock, i pulled back,she leaned over, take it out, no, go on , take it out.I unzip,release my cock, her hand strokes it, slowly then a little faster.I respond, bucking up ,she smiles then leans over,her head going over my cock,up, down,her hand tickling my balls.She lifts her head up,fuck me,no, go on but wear a condom.i havent got any, get some, so i go out to the counter,minimum buy three.I go back in,sit down, take my cock out and put the condom on,she sucks my cock until it is hard, then stands, lifts her dress, pulls her panties down and slowly sits on my cock, easing all the way down.I heard her sigh as my cock went all the way in,then she leaned forward a little and started to go up and down on my cock,tight but wet, groaning as she fucked.A guy moved closer, standing with his trousers down, cock hard, wanking, i grabbed her hips as she ground down on me,yelping,until i could take no more and blew up into her, she kept going until i stopped her.She stood up,leaned over the chair in front, hoisted her dress up and said to the guy, put a condom on and you can fuck me too, i gave him one, he put it on and grabbing her hips, with one thrust, pushed up into her,she moaned but pushed back to meet his thrusts,another guy who was quite large came over, i gave him a condom and with one final thrust the other guy shot his load, he pulled out,my sister started to stand but i pushed her back down as the big guy stood behind her and pushed into her.It took a while,my sister yelping, squirming until he was in her and then he fucked her, slowly then quicker,she came, i know by the way her body stiffened,then went like a rag doll as he rooted up into her until finally he blew releasing his cumm.He pulled out, my sisters hole was very wet.She slumped back, i helped her into her pants, out, back to the car and took her home.I carried her to the bedroom, and lay her down on her stomach, i lifted her dress and pulled her pants down, my cock going hard at the sight of her ample bum.I went to her bathroom,there was some vaseline, i smeared some on my cock,straddled her and guided my cock to her rear hole.I positioned it,no reaction, then slowly pushed forward my cock slowly entering , back, in, back until i was in her tight hole.I waited, then began to fuck ,she was tight, my cock feeling her insides,thenher hole clenched my cock, geez, i stopped, she clenched again, then i heard her say let me get on my knees, i lifted back as she knelt leaning forward, now finish what you started,so i fucked up into her,and having coumm earlier i went for quite some time as she reached under and bought herself to orgasm,her hole clenching my cock making me spurt up into her tight channel as she bucked to meet me.She collapsed, i rolled off and we slept.When she went to go the next day she looked at me and said same time next week, turned, lifted her dress and walked away.

way way too hot! love it!!

took my new (4 months married) wife to see a soft X rated in a nice thearter and set up for a good looking younger guy to play with her and then went out for drinks and after a couple drinks he fucker her in the back seat with his 8 inch rod. She fucked him for years, he treated her so good.

Your story has promise. Thanks.

I love it and look forward to reading the next "hour" as soon and I get the sticky off of my fingers.....mmmmm yummmm.

I love how she is used against her will, but loves it, needs it but tries so hard to reject it, Keep it going, it has lots of running room.

Great Job

I love all of your stories. Please write more

Erotic story moving onto the Second Hour

Jesus absolutely a great read..definitely bone stroker..keep writing.yoir good kiddo.7