All Comments on 'Atlantic Virgin'

There are many stories on here that are just crude, lewd or downright impossible. This story, and especially its companion '24 Hours', explores what happens in real life sexual encounters when, for whatever reasons, things just 'click'. It treats things that many would see as mild fetishes as natural and understands so well how people feel when they just want to share everything pleasurable.

A brilliant submission - if your real lives are like this then you are two very lucky people.

When do you plan to submit another?

I think you are my new favorite author!!!!! I loved the details, the verbage, all of it!!!! MUST GO TO PARIS, NOW!!!!

Yet another fabulous story which despite it's length keeps you entertained and excited throughout. God I wish I had some of the astonishing luck "Tom" has had.

You are way more long-winded than I am! Still, I love your emails, and this story, while it made me wait longer than I like for some action, didn't fail to get me wet and frothy! Sue is a very lucky girl, you sexy thing!

Love, Fuck Toy

I have read hundreds of stories on this site and this has to be the very best! Charcterisation, romance, sexual content, homor all rolled into one. Please write some more Tom, I am breathless, you have excited me like no other. Thank you. Alison x

I met a girl in Paris once, but we never had sex like this! What a lucky guy to meet someone like Lisa. Great story, a bit long but who cares when it's as entertaining as this one. It has to be one of the best on this site! Keep writing Tom.

Whether fact or fiction this one is marvellous. 24 Hours was a beaufifully entertaining story but this one is even better. You kept me awake all night you lovely man, and that's something no one has done in a long while! When is the next one? Can't wait!

Fab story! Something for everyone in here. Well written, not at all smutty just totally erotic.

Damn that was good! My fiancee and I recently visited Paris and you brought the place to life. We found your hotel too but wont tell the real name and spoil it! You are right, somehow sex is better in Paris and yes, we heard a couple doing in the next room too. They were very verbal, you can guess the effect it had on us! We are going to read 24 Hours when we get a moment,keep writing, you are helping our sex life along real fine! Rich LA

Fantastic story, the longest literotica story I've read all the way through and the first one I've commented on.

It doesn't get repetitive and is compelling and entertaining throughout.

Excellent craftsmanship.

Nice to have intelligent, literate erotic writing. I also liked how British your characters sounded. Well done.

Never on this site have I read a story this long, but I am elated that I chose this one. It was truly my pleasure to read your well-crafted, beautifully erotic submission. I look forward to exploring your other work! Please do keep writing.

What a wonderful enjoyable story, I know Paris very well, you have done your homework. Or perhaps it really is true. You truly made my day, I jumped my wife with relish when she got back home. Looking forward to more. Richard, Barbados

I agree with the others, this has to be the best story I have ever read on here, and I've read a few! The wife is very particular and it even turned it her on! Your English sense of humor, your grammar and your dialogue are just perfect,no wonder this won an award.I must now read your other stuff, if it's as good as this my hand will be worn out! Jason, Fort Worth

I work in the same office as Jason and he told me about this and fuck it is so good I had to go to the staff toilet and jerk off. Twice. Lisa sounds cool, where are all these women when we need a fuck? Al FW

I work in the same office as Jason and he told me about this and fuck it is so good I had to go to the staff toilet and jerk off. Twice. Lisa sounds cool, where are all these women when we need a fuck? Al FW

I work in the same office as Jason and he told me about this and fuck it is so good I had to go to the staff toilet and jerk off. Twice. Lisa sounds cool, where are all these women when we need a fuck? Al FW

True or false this is the best. More of the same please! Rex Fort Worth. (Same office!)

I was a very pleasant afternoon for me and I think others too. I will have to read more of your work! This made my afternoon and I am still smiling Please write more like this while I catch up on all else you have written! Santaklause

One minor suggestion. The Bastille was destroyed during the Revolution.

I really enjoyed this and will certainly read your other submissions. Thanks for your efforts.

Great story thanks for sharing. Discovered your stories by accidentally clicking the wrong one. Very pleasurable mistake.

The prologue of

A Desk Job in London

states that it is a continuation of Atlantic Virgin.

Paul in Oklahoma