All Comments on 'Aunt Eva'

Many Feathers:

Well told, easy reading, and a beautiful ending. Thank You. Ronnie W.

The surprise ending with the earrings gets me to hoping that there is a couple more chapters. Please don't leave us hanging like this as just that one sentence brought me to attention.

Sounds like a little twist there at the end. I hope to hear more from this story.

you have me in awe, you know that? What a sweet, wonderful, incredibly sexy story, I loved it. And that ending...damn Many Feathers...now I'll never be able to stop wondering!

All my Love xxx Your Anna

Well written and great story - hope the saga will continue before long, can't wait

this ranks right up there with your best, if not your best.

And WOW! Thats saying something! Begs to be finished....

You get another feather.

Thank you,

Dave

great story, please dont leave us hanging in midair, this one kept me on the edge of my seat, especially the unspoken twist at the end. this one has a future.

Something tells me it wasn't mom that went out shopping!!!!

What a pointe at the end. This story certainly has a lot of raffinesse and I really liked it in many ways.

and a great great story for a rainy day in Beijing.

Thanks RL... now i have to try and find the sequel if any.

That was fantastic. Please keep giving us more great stories like this.

HOT SEX as dear Auntie teaches the boy where it's at! This tale demonstrates family togetherness. Nobody here seems to like wearing clothes or just hanging on to their own gonads. Ah, well, sex is better after proper instruction, right? And it's supposed to be fun.

GREAT STORY,I was hoping ,that he makes love to his mother.lovely ending please add some more to this beautiful sexy tail . The next time SIS comes to visit they spend the night in each others arms. only later to discover that both wemon are naked & he is given the choice of door #1 or #2 ,which is no problem for him ,until he discovers that neither woman has ear rings,and he cant hide his erection..PLEASE PLEASE more along this line ....

Did Aunt Eva take her brother in law to the airport and it was her sister that made love with Mark in that dark secluded spot in the corner of the yard? Was there a "switch" made? Mark felt differences but failed to pick up on them. Did he unknowingly make love with his mother?

Well told, with the right amount of eroticism, and a little fillip at the end! Makes me wonder if it was the mother and not Sis he made love to in the night. The last line alludes to it. That is a great way to inflame the imagination. Kudos to you for a great story!!

A very well written story with just the right amount of suspense at the end. Was there a suggestion that there was more to come with mother and son??? I sincerely hope so.

I think the last long loving sex was with his mom!

love the ending. After reading it again i'm positive he did make love to his mother in the end. The story was so well done sensual erotic and hot all in one. This story got my heart racing :)

Very passionate and surprising.

Nice thing for both sides boy and women.....

Great that Mark didn't figure it out. Loved that. :)

Nice twist you twisted wonderful writer! Love to see a second chapter.

You know, there are some unknowns here. My Big question (in the back of my mind) is: did mom ever actually ever give the earrings back to Eva during all that time? Was that actually his Mother who taught him all that he'd ever need to know to keep a woman happy? Or maybe Aunt Sissy did take his virginity that night and traded back and forth with his mom. The sisters swapping earrings back and forth would keep him a little off-balance as to who is who, so they could run the game they wanted to. They could also do a little detective work that way. Mom pretending to be Aunt Sis might get Dad to admit to something unwittingly that he might not say to his wife.Yes, the Twins, the earrings, two cheating husbands, and a relatively naive young man make for interesting combinations. I like this very much!

AND DID NOT REALISE IT...WONDER HOW LONG BEFORE SHE TELLS HIM....AND THEN LETS HIM CONTINUE HAVING HER....

Talk about leaving someone wanting more. I'm very curious to know whether he fucked his until or mother. Thank you for writing this. Please write a Chapter 2.

So Mark got to bang each of the twins,even if he didn't realize it!

Since it looks as though Dad's new position will have him taking more business trips,Mom needs to come clean with Mark so that they can get in plenty of practice for Aunt Sis's return!

Great story! 5+

I loved​this story and I think you should make a second chapter to where he finds everything out and get's together with Mom and Aunt. After Mom and Aunt get divorced.

It was pretty obvious other than the dress they wear that night mark didn't notice when his "mom" take her dad to the airport instead requested by his real mom to switch instead 'coz she wants to know what really happen with her sister and mark doing when she and her husband were out. Another is the change of behavior during the last sex when "eva" was hotter than she used to be. It draws a good twist and creepy as well.

All the folks who want further chapters don't get it-- you ended the story with us not knowing, and meant to end it there, and were right to do so. Well done.

I loved your story but it ended too soon . With a father that is taking more business trips and who has been unfaithful in the past it is a receipe for more of the same . No man knows a women better , and no man strives to see a woman be happier than her son . The mother will find happiness in the arms of her son . The only question is if Aunt Sis (Eva) will return to join them or not .

ANOTHER GREAT STORY. THANK YOU MANY FEATHERS! THANX

So is Mom going to see Bob? If that's the case then it means she knows about Eva and Mark! That also means Eva will be sleeping with Steven, Right? Then that makes me think, did Mark sleep with his mother? Why are these twins that 'pretend' to love Mark at the very least as an aunt and mother do him that way? Aunt said the mom was worried about Mark and didn't want to see him hurt, right? Isn't lying to him about all of this going to hurt him when he finds out? This could have been a great story if it was approached properly, but doing Mark the way they are is more likely to make him turn out like Bob and Steven, which you would think they would not want. Not to mention Mark should already mistrust Eva for not holding his confidence to begin with.

Aunt Eva took Steven to Airport, Mom took Mark to the back yard she likes wine Eva don't. Mom tell mark about Steven's Affair and that she has Fantasies (about Mark) and even lays the groundwork for when he finds out tell him to 'cut his mother some slack'. Then it's Mom that goes to see Bob (most likely) leaving Eva and her Diamonds with Steven and (Mark). It's a shit ending if you ask me, it turns what started out as a sweet Aunt teaches Nephew story into twisted manipulative twins toy with the feelings of the only good man in their life. I was feeling sorry for Eva and almost started to feel for Mom before I worked out what bitches they are. Now I only feel for Mark he was used, period. Not Loved like they claim.

Well, you must have been around in thed 1960's , you really know to TWIST. That's what you did to this story, who knows who's fucking who??, a chapter 2 would be nice.

Nice story but who's who. THANKS???

Wow. Reading others comments, I figure they are right. Hope u write more chapters & let us in on our assumption.

Aunt Eva is a keeper. Period.

Aunt Eva is a keeper. OK?

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I was a late bloomer both physically and emotionally. I was shy.

I was already 18 when i really had to shave. Intellectually I was excellent.

I was 19 when i first had sex.

Such an erotic natural progression of events. Mom had on the earrings the night before Eva left.

Both sisters are manipulating whores. No wonder their husbands are cheating on them. Never thought for a minute that Eva wasn't telling his mom everything. Twins... Mark is just an ignorant

toy now.

Cute. A bit dense our hero. There's a German saying however: "The dumbest farmer harvests the biggest potatoes."

Some of these comments are disturbing boy. Holy shizzle!

Great story. A twist, extremely intimate and direct but not rushed. Great!