by EnCarta
I loved this story, especially since I love the resisting/can't help it part of your stories, while not being much of a fan of the pain/domination side. Since this story has loads of the first and virutally none of the second, I loved it.
I think it's the females cousins turn to be tied up and ravished.
I could do with fewer incoherent babbling and more filthy talk. Involve the 2 sisters and the father and you got a hit on your hands!
Your story is potentially really hot. It's well-written (except for your using "it's" as a possessive). Like the other commentator though I could have done with far fewer Naahhs, etc., and more down and dirty talk, from Sylvia, especially. But all-in-all a great start.
Lady in Chicago