by Goldeniangel
You have that unusual quality to write from both sides. You expressed the thoughts of the bandit with enough clearity that I was right there with him, while at the same time giving me the opportunity to understand what the young woman might be feeling. Thank You for a keyboard spattering experience.
Once again your story is excellant. No matter what catagory your submission is in the story is always tantalizing, well written, and succinct. Keep them coming, cumming?
Steve oldsurferdude@msn.com
I really enjoyed your story. I loved the description and you have a very good ability to make your characters belivable. Keep writing, I'd love to read more stories by you.
How very hot and original. You have here a complete setting, complete characters, a complete story...most excellent. I myself have experience the wonderment of convincing a young lady that she will remain a virgin if you fuck her ass. In truth, who cares? Again, all is so accurately captured. Good job. You have a real talent here.
A very sexy story. Personally, I would have liked to see them fall in love.
descriptive passages were life-like. I swear just reading your prose I could feel the sensations on my dick.
This was beautifully written and the reactions of the maiden made this a beautiful story. I was starting to think she might decide to give up her vagina to him as well. She was certainly enjoying the experience by the time he climaxed. Excellent job once again by you!
5 stars
she likes how it hurts one of the best noncon painal
hot dirty painful makes panty wet
damn he is a gud guy he he went her down and ate her pussy nice and clean made her cum nicely
thumbs up
wonderful..of course she would have a full muffin...Lady Gillette didn't exist back then...always been amazed how they first convinced women they had to shave legs and pits, and finally their fantastic bush....
I do love forced sex that turns pleasureable for both. Thanks for writing this one.