All Comments on 'Beautiful Neighbourhood Aunty'

try first person and some punctuation..it will help a lot

Barring quite a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes...this is too good writing...almost as if we can visualize everything right in front of our eyes...do complete the story,make neeraja were very low sari and low cut backless blouse,make her a slut in the 15 days...make her suck ur dick too....make her wear more earrings/rings on each ear....do continue...excellent work

Definitely repulsive! Consent is the key word. If this is your M.O. in the future you might well evolve into the next Bill Cosby...

You need help with a proof reader but your style and your writing is very vivid.