All Comments on 'Becoming His'

I have never cared much for BDSM. I grew up believing that the way to treat a woman was with kindness and gentleness. However, this story was sexy as Hell. I loved it. I loved the fact that she wanted to please and wanted to be fucked and wanted to be submissive. Very well done! I am as hard as a rock.

Nookiehunter

young lady...BRAVO!!!! VERY much worth waiting for and as usual there wasn't a disapointing moment, you deliver BDSM in the style it should be shown and read and well...lived. i can't wait to see what you come up with next no matter what subject line it comes under...and soon pleaseeeeeeee....Thank you again for allowing us to read you it was truly a honor*smile* respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I love your stories so much and I wish you were able to write more. I have not been disappointed in any of your stories. I have been hooked ever since Marrying for Money & even more hooked after Trailing Home. Please keep writing!

This was absolutely Incredible!

One hot story. Sure to make your dick hard and make you want to fuck her.

this was truely amazing, not only is the writing beautiful but its steamy and sexy as well without being trashy. its perfectly balanced, you cant read it without wishing to be one of the charachters

Very hot! I'll definitely be checking out what other stories you have to offer!

wow... i wish i was her. fantastic writing.

I never was in for BDSM, but this was way more sexy form me than it was repulsive! (I usually don't read it!)

Thank You Haremgirl!

John

The authour caught the main character's emotions exquisitely. Her descent was very well described.

The scenarios played out were very hot and well described with a rich vocabulary that never became repetitive or dull.

Well done!

I love this story so much i could read it over and over again. Great work!

wow....... amazing. please continue T/their story.... great work and a powerful understanding of D/s. i emailed the story to my Master. He never shares me but the passion and love between Jake and lisa will please Him as much as it did me. thank you for a wonderful story.

What an incredible story! -- so much better than the usual boring round of "slut sucks spanks and fucks" illiterate, predictable BDSM crap. Finding an actually well-written, incandescently hot BDSM story is like my own personal holy (horny?) grail. There just aren't words to express how impressed I am -- both by the story and by the author. Please, PLEASE write more -- mankind needs you.

Nothing wrong with the writing.

the story didn't turn me on though.

A sad dream, where was the love?

And the fun.

Yoron.

for sharing another of your great stories.

Thank you for this wonderful story. I wanted to be her so bad.

A wonderful read by a fine writer. I want to read more, and that is the highest compliment.

An excellent plot, and so very well written.

Rather than list a long string of superlatives which would all be accurate I'll just say the story touched me to my core leaving me hard and in need of a shower.

Thank you.

kept my eyes rapt to the screen awesome story

Exciting story!

The writing in the story is okay, but I found the plot cliched and the characters shallow and unconvincing. The dialogue was pretty weak too.

I loved it, it it was exciting all the way to the end. Very satisfying story.

That was very hot. I would love for you to continue this story!! Please....

Wow. Fuck...

Blotanhunka@yahoo.com

3 stars