All Comments on 'Bela's Story Continues'

great come back story man...let her be not so submissive next, a little is fine!

so so good! cant wait for you to continue!

Great to see you back. And also a great continuation unlike others who take up other authors work and spoil it. Good the see that it hasn't happened in your case.

Also, a request, could you please continue your "When my friend came to stay" story?

The same essence of aurelius has been kept very wisely , i am really looking forward for the upcoming parts and i would really like to see you write more frequently

very enjoyable!

keep writing

You are good man. Can you make sequel of aurelius1982 Indian Wife and Construction Guys story. Some one else has also tried but ruin it badly. The way you write, it can become a great sequel like this one.

Hi yes this great loved the original story and now this excellent hope you can add a bit more to the Bela story

Good story overall.. a bit long but that was essential for the story to build up.. keep writing

somehow it doesn't seem the submissiveness or obedience of Bela is being utilized at all.

If you want to continue anyone's rose story ,please continue the "shop floor guys" by urban slut if I'm not mistaken ...

Continue this story of Bela in more sequels and if possible write a sequel to the below story as well

https://www.literotica.com/s/anjalis-evening-out

The original author's story is pretty much old and didn't continue for quite a long time. When it was thought the line is lost in the wind, this sequel came pretty much within the contexts and nature of writing of the original authors version.

Here, I'd suggest a following options to continue the story further:

1. A prequel of Bela's escapades before her marriage

2. Bela's escapades continuing with Shyam in the public - just as she did with Gautam in the earlier parts

3. Bela and Shyam continue on their outdoors, picnics, movies, etc in the absence of Gautam

4. The eventual cognizance of Gautam's knowledge over the dalliance and the ensuing threesome.

Appreciate the authors for their efforts.

Thank you sooo much for posting this continuation! It was my favourite story on xossip and im so glad you are active here now HornyNri, ur a legendary writer!! Hope to read more of your stories soon. Particularly more with Bela!

very well written

would be something if we were to find out bela and chandan werent as innocent as she made out...

Very good story!

Please continue it, to maybe adding a situation when the husband find Shyam and Bela in action and join them! It will be awesome!

Hi, the story really excellent, please continue with more parts

You made it more better than the original story

What if Shyam's wife joins this party

Outstanding work

I don't know if writer will read comments but this is the best story i ever read. Please consider below feedback....

#please let bela remains innocent. That's the best part of story which makes it different.

She is slowly opening up which is the most important part.

#please let her discribe more details to her husband

#please make a situation where Bela is submissive and she got fucked in ass and she have to tell it to her husband later in her words. She is virgin in ass.

#please let her also initiate and control some situations

#please do not bring any other women in the because this is just about bela

#this story is close to my heart and i will be sharing my fantasy to my wife by making her read this story

#please consider that bela is not that easy to get for anyone and it should be someone very lucky to have not every other man.

Thanks in advance