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All Comments on 'Beyond The Bedroom: The Balcony'

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MigbirdMigbird4 months ago

Quirky - both storyline and characters. She is intriguing in predictable way.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Would be great if both these imbeciles died. Please find a different hobby!

HighBrowHighBrow4 months ago

Not poorly written, but there is no story….

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago
NA

Nothing unique

Anther cowardly author following the heard on this site.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wrong category, poorly written and just generally a bad idea.

dt1784dt17844 months ago

Not for me, sure someone will love it

tomtomatotomtomato4 months ago

It's a good start - looking forward to Part 2, I want to see where this goes

Jamaican25Jamaican254 months ago

A little convoluted but I like the style...I suspect more to come from this storyline.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very poorly written

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

painted a very nice picture with words I liked the shaka pola part very much

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