All Comments on 'Bi-friends'

FAR TOO WORDY...sheeeeesh!<BR>Not too many misspellings, grammar or punctuation errors, but enough to be distracting.

<BR><BR>EDIT!<BR>A much less wordy, much more erotic version of this would be SCORCHING HOT!

made it nicely intense. I would enjoy more adventures of Brad Cindy Jack and Donna

You know its War and PEACE? Try getting your spelling and grammar right before you rag on somebody else.

This was an awesome story I loved the length of it, it added extra layers to something that wouldn't have been as good if it was limited to one page. I love reading Novellas like this

Loved it!

Wow!! great story loved every second of it.

great story

loved it

Loved the twists and turns fo this story! Kept things very interesting. Very creative!

One of the best I have seen on here, simply a marvelous job. Hope there's more to cum....

I see comments all the time about your stories from men that don't like the gay sex. Well maybe us girls like it. Most stories are about bi women, which I like yes. But the guys need to at least jerk each other off, and you went there and more. Thanks. Exciting.

What a marvelous story. I'm a bi male and this is right up my alley. Thanks for a great read and quite a few orgasms.

As a guy, makes me wish I was a bit more bi than I am...

Also married, lol.

...but then became relentless. I lost interest and made worse by name changing part way through to ''Steve", plus distracted by spelling errors. Eg. Split instead of slit.

I would like to say your story telling is always great, and I really loved the way it went, all the teasing really got my 73 year old cock standing up like I was 30. Not everyone cares about a couple of mistakes, so keep up the great work.

Great story like all your others. I've never had sex with another man, but as aroused as your story made me I would probably enjoy it. Keep up the good work.

Damn that was super hot!!

It’s a hot story but how do you fill the ass you are fucking with cum if you are wearing a condom, how do you feel cum splashing inside your ass if the guy fucking you is wearing a condom?

very good, funny too. like the Tshirt wording too. except both guys wore condoms so I guess cum didn't splash inside any asses..

I would love to have a life and friends like this.

Great story!

I would love to be watched by my wife as I am fucked hard by a man.