All Comments on 'Binoculation'

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Darrin_PhillipsDarrin_Phillipsalmost 3 years ago

Really liked the story, and yes please continue it in a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Please continue

Please continue this it has a long way to go!!!!!!

Scorpio1952Scorpio1952almost 3 years ago

The story very good I might add some light to moderate bondage as well as getting her nipples and the hood of her clit pierced so her could lead her around on his leash.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story pls continue

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 3 years ago

Nice Start can't wait to see who he and Mother choose to become his wife (slave). Will it be the pretty brunette or someone completely different.

SimonNomisSimonNomisalmost 3 years ago

Looking forward to more of this one.

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicmalmost 3 years ago

would like to see more of this great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

keep it cumming

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

please write more, this is good writing, good editing, good story flow. not too long like some stories on here can get. i cant wait to read about the new future wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Looking forward to more of this

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 2 years ago

Not a bad start. I wander how many he’ll end up with and how many will get pregnant..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Erotic but ridiculous.

Keep writing.

MLJ

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