All Comments on 'Birthday Girl in Her Birthday Suit'

Wonderful story and nicely written. Congratulations on the Green E. May you receive many more

When I received my Green E under my BostonFictionWriter name, I wore the thing around my neck for a year. Only, difficult to drive with it, the glow got in the eyes of oncoming cars as if I had on my high beams. My folly was to write the story that bashed the hand that fed me, Green E Blessed or Curse, by BostonFictionWriter. Apparently Laurel didn't think my story as humorous as I did (lol).

I don't know if they still do, but when I was given my Green E, they also gave me a Literotica hat, keychain, coffee mug, tee-shirt, baseball cap, and a green satin jacket with my name in script.

Seriously, this was fantastic and very well written! I've only given out 5 stars three other times, and I'm happy to say that this is the 4th! Thanks for a great read! My only question is, what happened to her clothes? I'm thinking that, because there was no culprit later on (like I thought there would be,) she really did have the rong tree... it was dark, after all. I was thinking she would make it home only to find that her room mate HAD followed her and took her clothes as a joke, and would them tell her how proud she was of her for making the trekk home in the nude. Your version was far better. Again, thanks for the great read! John (WK)

@SusanJillParker, Wow, I may be terrible at keeping track of my stories, because I hadn't the slightest idea I had a Green E until I read your comment, and then I went back to check, and suddenly it was like, "Oh, wow." It sometimes seems like we only get what we want once we give up pursuing it... Thanks for the compliments on the story!

@WritingKnight, I had a couple of canonical answers in mind while writing, but really, I felt that investigating it in the story would only slow things down, unless I wanted to turn it into Embarrassed Naked Female Detective, which, mind you, would be a pretty awesome story, just not the one I wanted to write. (Although now I do...)

Wonderful story, it had tension and humor all rolled into one. Had a blast reading it.

Well done! Funny, cute and sexy.

Despite using writer's name, describing that inpromtu blow job 'she' witnessed from a 'convenient tree'. Good luck with tasting your own orgasmic residue, in due course. This old lady reader guessed 'Liquid Matthew' might have already tasted, some of his own creamy ejaculate, whilst contributing to this ironic masterpiece?

Totally hot! More please...

Albeit common to many exhibitionists of borth sexes, every stage of nakedness taken would be ultra-humiliating, if any stark naked adventurers were discovered by total strangers. Look forward to this Author's further submissions?

"susurrus"...Awesome vocabulary!

@Anonymous, Just wait until I use "widdershins!"

That was hellamazing!!!

I laughed so hard i snorted milk out my nose!

BRILLIANT!!!

Such beautiful detail.....but you left us all hanging with Emily starkers in front of friends and family, and a party about to unfold......

How many games can you come up with to further exploint her exhibitionist's humiliation??

What else can you encourage her to do that she's NEVER done before!!

Keep up the GREAT writing!!

whee that was awesome!! very vivid writing, great twist!

I agree, stories like this are make from the TENSION not getting caught. Great job!

Read a story with a similar surprise birthday party ending from Playboy sometime ago. I can't understand why the Green E for this one, as it's not really that original and the author had yet to edit out the typo. If readers are looking for hot night excursions, many other more deserving stories come to mind.

I don't understand the Green E, either, to be honest.

The title of the story says it all. Except for the occasional voyeuristic excitement she had at several different times during her sojour accross unknow vistas and barriers! Emily handled it well.

The disappearance of Emily's clothes was suspenseful, and definitely suspect. Who took her clothes?

The story is exciting, the imagery of Emily racing, sprinting, jostling, hiding, jogging, and hustling her ass across byways and highways is an erotic visual. Her dialogue of thoughts are exciting as her thinking continues the building of the suspense of the story. Fantastic theme and character setup.

Loved the story. Really well-written!

This is an old, old, story, told in a slightly different way. None the less, I liked it!

I have to admit this was difficult to masturbate too as I was to busy loving your writing, your story was so rich in detail and beautifully written, if you never written a non pornographic story I really hope you do, great job

I had this happen to me when I was about 16, but this was obviously much more enjoyable!! Great writing and plot. Xx

@Anonymous, I'd love to hear about your experience. Send me feedback if you get the chance. :)

being forced naked in public with the tension of the possibility of being seen being exiting and terrifying, is exactly my favorite kink to read.

5/5

sorry if that doesn't really make sense my brain isn't fully functional right now

@Anonymous

No worries! It makes sense! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Feel free to send me feedback if you want to discuss it more. I' love to get your perspective.

If among her packages were the clothing she had started out with that night.

Just imagine what happened after that incident. She either ran away from the room or tried to cover up her bare body by whatever within her range, but when doing so the later she had to be naked for a while which in turn made her embarrassed for some days or years....

The only disappointment for me is that we don't find out what happened to her clothes. Loose ends, gotta hate 'em. Still a 4* effort.

I used to slip out and go naked around the various neighborhoods I lived in during warm weather. Not frequently, but many, many times over the years.

The sexy feelings of being vulnerable were overwhelming and I really enjoyed the risks involved.

Nicely done. I like that you built the tension, and made this erotic story about the story. Too many writers spend all their time just describing sex acts.

It was only exhibitionist at the end, but that made it much more interesting. The build up was super. Nice finish.

Thanks Matthew. What a great little story, makes you feel good. I suppose she is appropriately dressed in her birthday suit, maybe she could invite the guests to strip off and join her and they would all be dressed the same for the occasion. Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you.

Great stuff. Sounds like one of my adventures ☺️☺️

Very well written--nicely paced, kept us in suspense, and a good curve at the end.