All Comments on 'Blackmail with Consequences'

Bob's up to new tricks!

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Loving wives, only because they squealed on Brad.

Inconsistency is the death knell to a story.

If he could calmly plan his wife’s execution as well as her lovers, then he isn’t a hothead, he’s a sociopath. And if he is a sociopath now, then he always has been.

And why would a sociopath care about their partners affair? They wouldn’t. They wouldn’t be angry, they either would or would not carry out the execution.

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Admirable that Tanya didn't want Bob to get screwed over for the promotion he had earned. She definitely gets points for loving her husband enough to out herself when the plan to kill him was revealed.

Having sex with the boss rather than coming to Bob with what was going on ... Sorry, still divorce time. Hell, she expected it, give her what she earned and expected.

He could have at least got the threesome.

Personally if another guy gets his phallus inside my wife that is it for me.

No going back.

So I am old fashioned sue me.

I was born when US of A practically pushed their women to promiscuity.

Not in my Asian country. It is only recently this decade I noticed there are a number of young women nowadays are beginning to fall for the western feminism lies that were fed to western women in the 60's. But I am glad they're very minority for now. Maybe another one hundred years from now when our women will get to where the western women are today. It will come. This world will be a Sodom and Gomorrah as prophesied in the scriptures.

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As of the story, I don't like it.

Enuff said.

waving at Brad. nice touch

Wow, a bald-faced murder on Literotica? How'd you get it by the gatekeepers? I'm glad you did, though, as it's a great story. My guess is that Tanya was enjoying her affair and would have kept at it if Brad had not begun plotting murder. Also, I'd be nervous having sex with a woman who helped you kill her husband. Such women are dangerous. So too are you, Bobby, for that matter! *****

Can't believe you kept her, I wouldn't have.

"it would guarantee you would get the promotion." - Yeah, like you can really trust Brad to keep his word.

I prefer the burial in a hidden grave in the sticks method of disappearance. And, of course, when Brad made his move on her, Tanya should have told her husband then, and discussed it, instead of fucking the guy. For that reason alone, he should ditch her. She can't rat him out for the killing because she was a co-conspirator - just as guilty. As far as Carol goes, he could make it his mission to teach her how to fuck. D

I liked it good thing the wife told him the truth.

Pretty lame, JPB.

Sooooooo, it's OK she'd been banging his boss for months ? It's OK that she's been lying and betraying him with his boss? It's OK that instead of her coming to her husband and telling him his boss wanted to fuck her, she just went on ahead and fuck'd him for weeks? It's all OK because she confessed? 😒😕... I don't believe she was just telling him those things she didn't mean them.. why would she need to down talk her husband with her lover? Why would she belittle her husband and praise her lover if she was being blackmailed? It just doesn't make any sense.. she clearly was enjoying fucking his boss otherwise she would've told him to fuck off.. no, she wanted the dick and used the excuse of blackmail and trying to help him secure a promotion.... there's no way this relationship will last..there was no consequences for the slut.. it was more like, it's OK that you've been fucking my boss for weeks/months.. I forgive you dear😂😂😂😂😂... this is why I stopped reading your stories.. the men are either idiots or desperate wimps... 🙄 😒 🤣... it's cheaper to keep her.. is it really though? STDs are pretty costly.. I'd rather be homeless and destitute than to stay with such a slut🤷🏽‍♀️.. .. a slut that will fuck your boss will fuck your brother, fuck your friends, fuck your neighbor.. just no boundaries.....I didn't like how the lover was made to disappear.. it takes two to tango.. he didn't force her, he didn't drug her, didn't rape her... she had options.. there's always an option.. had she really loved him and not his wallet she would've immediately went to her husband they could've came up with a plan together to ruin his boss and get his boss job.. she wouldn't have shifted on her wedding vows.. that's not what she did though.. she eagerly betrayed him.. he actually believed she didn't mean those things she was saying to his boss?😕😭😭😭😭😭.. her explanation made no sense.. telling your lover you've never had an orgasm with your husband and you're only with him for his money doesn't make any sense...that's not erotic sex talk😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.. she allowed another man to disrespect her husband, run his name through the mud while she eagerly participated.. that makes the whore an accomplice

Should have left it in the dead files. It sucked big time.

One murder or 2, what's the difference? Tanya is a cheating whore that he would be better off without. Take Carol's offer kill the dickhead and his whore then get some porno and give Carol some tutorials on how to fuck. Then she's the total package.

JPB Not your best. A nice plot but little character development. Also the plot was confusing when Bob choked Brad unconscious put him in car trunk with sand bags then next paragraph he sends his wife to meet Brad and find out Brad’s plan to kill Bob.

WOW! JPB does it again! Great Story! I liked the way Hubby got his temper under control. I had the same issue from being a Biker. LOL That sales where I worked later didn't know what hit him when He complained when I knowingly stole his sale. Made a big mess in the bathroom at work. Blood from his bloody nose was everywhere! LOL Anyway, I thought it was "HOT" when the wife admitted she was screwing his Boss and he didn't get mad. I always like confessions from a woman. Mostly cuz they are so rare I guess. 5 stars for Bob, I love a happy ending!

Had read it before and liked it then as well as now.

I always wanted more penance sex, though. And why didn't he (with enthusiasm at his great good luck in getting to fuck her) TEACH Carol how to be a better lover? And then include Tanya in the last one or two trysts where she had to lick Carol to orgasm and get pounded by Carol with a strap-on several times just to see how that scenario played out?

Just asking.... Damn good story. More please.

Creative plot twist and written well. I enjoyed it.

"Surely you don't believe that I meant any of that stuff you heard. I love you Bobby and I hope to hell that you know I do. All I was doing was feeding Brad's ego. You have to know I don't believe any of that about you."

Ehh...why though? Feeding his ego was completely unnecessary. She didn't need to be cold towards him just not really engage if he disparaged her husband. And from the sound of it it was mostly her talking crap about her husband. Brad didn't even talk bad about his own wife and she sounds like she might be remarkably bad.

Also she wouldn't let Brad do anal. So you see she does have boundaries. But she swallowed for him which she never did for her husband. Again I ask why? More ego boosting? Then why not let him do anal?

No. It doesn't add up. What it sounds like to me is that she was completely on board with Team Brad until he started talking about murder. And that was after the murder it freaked her out. She meant what said about her husband.

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Good tale especially where he waves at Brad in his new home. LP

Not one of your best

As good a writer as you are putting your name on this one show that everyone has a bad day. In your case a bad story.

IMO, he forgave his wife, far too soon. She needed to feel some pain.

Long ways from your best work.

I have to agree with the other comments that the ending sucked.

After getting Tanya to swallow and do anal as penance, he should've bumped her off too. She whored herself out to the boss, so doesn't deserve forgiveness. After that, all he had to do was train Carol how to be better in bed and she would've been a big upgrade on his deceitful ex-wife.

Something feels missing in this one. Perhaps it was the protagonist’s lack of affect. Or maybe that the culminating scene was left to the readers imagination. It was a nice twist to have the revenge sex to be a major disappointment. It just wasn’t enough to keep it from falling flat.

Fun story but with a major hole (or two). No need for Tanya to fuck Brad. Get him to re-offer while being recorded (wouldn't be hard). Let husband know, file a sexual harassment suit. It would come out that Brad's wife owns the company, would have him fired, both for being a cheating scumbag and to limit their liability, wife would divorce him and as part of the settlement he'd get his bosses job.

Also, as others have pointed out, no way Tanya was innocent. Why would she agree to fuck Brad so her husband would get a job that he would have got anyway a year later when Jake retired??? She fucked Brad because she wanted to.

Not read it before, Bob. So all's good. 5* story.

<<Many of my readers have indicated that they don't think I know what I'm doing. I guess this proves they might be onto something.>> Says the man who laughs all the way to the bank. Or... at least all the way to the Village Inn!!

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So.... who was the "he" that entered by the front door and met his fate? Hit man? Or Brad? The next scene, Tanya was speaking with Brad. But Brad is apparently under the new high-rise.... Still, 4/5!

Hmmm, not the ending l envisaged. I thought he would murder Brad, after Tanya told him Brads plan, but l thought the consequences would be him being betrayed by both Carole and Tanya for the murder.

The ending then being that Carole and Tanya were in a relationship and now they have gotten rid of their husbands and they have everything.

2/5

"Wave at the high-rise..."

LOVED THAT !!!

Another 5 !

EastCoaster

This should have stayed on the hard drive.

Your last three are very disappointing. Not up to your usual stuff. Hope it is not a trend.

Yeah, no.

Eh,not a great jpb story, lacked the frisson of his usual stories and Pauline French didn't show up.

Better than the previous two. Buster, the biker cuck, used yo be a badass. Oh my!

You’ve done all of this more than once, even if not exactly in the same way.

This is deserving of no more than one star. Absolute trash.

Thanks for the effort. Killing Brad is usually an automatic "5", but letting the slut get away with it drops you to a "3". Yeah, I know how much sleep that's going to cost you. Hope he doesn't decide to build a swimming pool. If she'll fuck Brad supposedly for her husband's promotion what will she do to get a fee heated pool option?

Typical dumb crap from this author.

To be fair it was so dumb by the point that Carol called and mentioned them offing Bobby that I gave up, so it may have gotten less dumb....but......

I sighed so hard my wife thought it odd at my age I'[d have a heart attack, when I read this "All I was doing was feeding Brad's ego." Yes, brain fart Bob seems to overlook that since she was being "blackmailed" her feeding his ego wasn't needed nor believable.

This author has always written really bad stories. Some are tolerable, more are not. Thats just a simple fact of life.

Did Brad get to meet the 'gloppity-glop' machine?

So, you've given up the .45 and gone for the 9mm. What's the matter, don't want to deal with the recoil? Getting old Bob? You pussy.

Thanks for the story. You are getting more and more off-beat. I love it.

Doc

The story was just okay. A love triangle involving the boss has so few outcomes.

Always a great pleasure to see "Just Plain Bob" in the author's line. Different people come to this site for different things. Some readers complain that the description of the sexual acts are way too short, but these stories lack any drama, conflict, or character development.

JPB's stories - along with a few other authors' - tell a tale: interesting plot, people in conflict, development of characters, and resolution. In JPB's stories, the resolution often occurs in the imagination of the reader, for which he has had more than a few complaints. The complainers don't realize the compliment he is paying them for having the intelligence to imagine the outcomes of the stories on their own.

For these reasons he is one of my top five favorite writers, and I'm glad he's still at it!

*****

A bit less than so so. Two stars.

no u never posted this here before it too stupid to forget. i've read all ur stories as well is all the other LW emotional cheating stories here. this would have been ok if it was fleshed out it is reads like a blueprint for a longer story

WELL, THE STORY HAD GREAT PROMISE AND A GOOD STORYLINE. IT WAS DIFFERENT FROM THE OTHERS I HAVE READ. BUT, IT FELL SHORT, 4 OR 5 PAGES SHORT. IT COULD HAVE HAD MORE DETAIL ABOUT THE DRAMA THAT WAS UNFOLDING. TOO MANY HOLES AND TO SOLT ON THE WIFE. BUT, I DID LIKE THE HINT ABOUT KEEPING THE WIFE CLOSE. IT REMINDS ME OF THE LINE IN THE GODFATHER PART II: "KEEP YOUR FINDS CLOSE, BUT KEEP YOUR ENEMIES CLOSER".

Works for me.

No, that's not my taste. The good story could have ended with traps and police and didn't need murder!

Psychopaths casually discuss murder, blackmail, cheating on and with each other. No feelings, no drama, just cold calculations of possible gain.

Great story premise, but main characters lack feelings and emotions usually associated with human beings.

Not bad.

Entertaining story. However, he needs to divorce her and run for the nearest exit. Why, you ask, simple. What happened to the drugs that she was supposed to put into his food?

R U related to Hoffa?

JPB has like 1/4 ratio for entertaining stories. This one is OK, as absurd as it is.

Great Story!! Loved It!!

***Thanks for the read.

Nice take away line. Seems like the choke hold paragraph is out of place since it was never said he was dead, merely passed out.

There was no blackmail though... just quid pro quo.

I could see forgiving blackmail... depending on circumstances.... hut not do much fling my boss so i could get a promotion. That's basically prostitution... what else would she put out for then?

LOL

Well I smiled as I read this, simple plot nicely written

At least there was sodomy. Thanks heavens for small mercies. I enjoyed the pure revenge aspects but the 92F is a trash gun, get a 1911A.