by damonX
I realy enjoyed your story. I cant wait for another instalment. I want to know what happens next! Having this as one of my personal fantasies.. seeing it played out like that, all I can say is WOW!! Thank you!
Damn that was hot. Please, please, please write what happens next soon!!!!!
It's been years did you ever write a sequal if not will you. It's a good story line shame if you didn't finish it.
Please... comtinue the story!
I will be a thrill to read how she ends up as a fuckslave and used as a payment
This has always been one of my favorite stories! Still think you should do a sequel
really, really good story, and just incredible writing on all your other works as well. write up a sequel!
Its believeable. and intriguing and definately hot. good writer lots of background and a good story line
shame theres other writers on this site with absolutely no talent what so ever
What if the boyfriend was very turned on by the thought of her being very dirty/sexy. Maybe a threesome with her, the BF and jack? Great story!
Well, please continue the story. She will be a video porn star with Jack as her manager. The stories are endless of what will happen to this girl. Too bad we did not get the story between the time she gets ass fucked and the bus. Just how long was she there? Was the cum still leaking out of her butt and pussy? There could have been more men but that would be coming in more chapters.