All Comments on 'Blue Moon'

Damn, i loved that, liked how you related it to the saying. And that was an awesome twist at the end. i hope you write a lot more.

Excellent plot and well done. Good, with two verys.

I really liked this story. It showed great imagination and you did a good job of describing the trip as I have taken such a trip more than a few times to exactly the places you described.

Thank you.

So she was a dog, literally. I can believe that. No problem.

What I find hard to believe, is a water pump on a VW micro-bus. Umm, air cooled engine and all.

Actually, I thought it was a good story and I liked it.

The dog was a nice twist.

You have an amazing imagination!!!!

OUTSTANDING

You dog you !!!

just plain wow...I think you blew my mind - seriously!!

I know you don't post much any more since what ever it was that affected the feeling in your hands and your ability to type. Not all of what you've written is for me but I've enjoyed all of the tales that were. When I read one of your stories it's like reading The Old Man And The Sea for the first time all over again. If I were to picture it, we'd be by a camp fire or in a comfortable living room by the fire place with a cup of coffee and just the hint of wood smoke in the air or just maybe you'd have a pipe and the smoke I smell is Borkum Riff or mixture 79 though it's not good for us or Politically Correct. Maybe there is even a little something for the aches in our coffee and the dogs would be divided between us with a head on a knee. I see and hear it in my minds eye as a peaceful time a time for Tales. Our surroundings dim the written words become the sound of your voice and even they seem to pass away as the story unfolds in my mind.... Such was this story for me. Thankyou

The "evil anonymous"

Thank You

An extremely good read, thoroughly enjoyed it. I found it very humorous when you put in about "The Twilight Zone" and it did fit perfectly, I could actually hear Rod Serling narrating! Many thumbs up!

"You are traveling through another dimension, a dimension not only of sight and sound but of mind..."

While 'Blue Moon' wasn't an episode of the old Twilight Zone series, it could have been (if you left the sex out, I mean!). Well done!

Fantastic! I love all your B' Girls and I love Rebecca - all your women were so lovely n real n sensual - you're great, MFs.

Yukimi

Just like most all your stories, when over, I felt as though I'd lost my best friend. Damn you are good, damn! Again thank you for another wonderful story, my favorite Author. No, not just a writer, but AUTHOR!

A really good story! But, a water pump on an old VW? They were AIR cooled (:).

This is a really great story that will blow you away at the end! I laughed out loud at the last page.

Really? A water pump on a vw bus?

Great story! I did not see the dog outcome but I was expecting a ghost of some kind. Like I said earlier, Great Story!