All Comments on 'BMOC: The Innocent Ch. 01'

Good job, sir. Very, very well written. Looking forward to the next installment.

I do like the artful seduction. This one, for a short story, developed relatively slow the way it should be done. The "Taboo" of a Christian girl just added to the erotic sense of it all. I enjoyed it!

Your stories are always well written and hot. just like the Roommate Relations Story, this one is also a 5 stars Story. well donw mate!

Carole,

I, too, like the taboo of a sweet Christian girl giving her pussy for the first time to a man.

Do you ever have fantasies about giving a man your Christian pussy?

Letting him -- a godless nonChristian --- instead of the Christian man you may later marry -- be the first to burst your hymen and show you how to fuck?