by Just Plain Bob
Weird, usually the husbands in your stories are more suspicious than this.
Like it never occurred to him that it would take about 2 hours just to make out with a guy and leave him horny? Or why if all she did was make out and grope, did she feel the need to shower after every encounter?
Sry, this was a 1star from me. He was so diligent initially but when he confronted her he just bought her story at face value.
The truth always comes out. Bob won’t forget or forgive what he saw her do. Her reason wouldn’t excuse what he saw. Cora should start looking for anew place to live. It won’t be with Brad as he will be done with her especially when she is no longer married. Beside he won’t be worth much after tripping over that tire iron a dozen times. Funny how he landed on his crotch every time.
I had always thought better of Pauline. This is a great disappointment to me.
A quick check with Dr Google would show that the proper version is Screw Him Over
2 stars... Not because of the story line (and I know, the cucks in the y'alliban like to bitch about anything short of beheading cheating women, but this isn't about that), but because as he has many times before, JPB is just recycling plots that he has used before. THis time without even dressing it up with a unique location or device. Just one of the standards with a new name slapped on.
You let that cunt get away with it?! You are a let down but then all your stories are...
Hated the ending. There will never be a sequel but if there is, the husband needs to find out and take affirmative action.
But now you have to explain that to me. A woman who appears to be a slut is cheating on her husband with the help of a friend he happens to meet in a bar, where he happens to tell his life story and where he happens to get advice on how to proceed. And the moment he leaves the bar, the "girlfriend" happens to be reporting to his wife what to tell him if the confrontation arises? Good thing I happened to read this story and happened to realize that your story has loads of "holes". But that's certainly coincidental.
If he genuinely believed that horse shit story from the girl in the bar or his wife he's an idiot. Finish the story please as ending it here just makes it annoying to read when you get to the end as it's well written otherwise.
But now you have to explain that to me. A woman who appears to be a slut cheats on her husband with the help of a friend he happens to meet at a bar where he happens to tell his life story and where he happens to get advice on how to proceed. And the moment he leaves the bar, the "girlfriend" happens to be reporting to his wife what to tell him if the confrontation arises? Good thing I happened to read this story and happened to realize that your story has loads of "holes". But that's certainly coincidental.
The low rating should have warned me but I still decided to read this. Wish I didn't.
Bob, I wouldn't give anyone permission to continue this story or this chick is gonna end up six feet under, ten times over.
Bob would still wonder why it took Cora two hours to get home after leaving Brad with blue balls. Maybe one day he'll be looking through their wedding album and see a familiar face.
If an adult couple is making out for weeks, I would not believe it ended with just kisses at 2nd base -- neither do the main characters in JPB stories. Part two of this story will surely remind us why we follow Just Plain Bob.
Loved it, great story! To continue the story, he quietly catches her while Brad is enjoying her charms, and then, in a bitchy SGR moment, he seduces Pauline French (having read your stories, I now know Pauline well in all of her incarnations), and gets some spectacular revenge. Then he and Pauline's husband go to a sports bar for some MGD and male bonding. 5*~~JBE
Really need another chapter on this where the soroity sisters get burned to the grouns
Cheating divisive whores who think it's okay to fuck over their husband. If this is what being college friends is about, it's certainly fucked up. I've said it before, I'll say it again, stories like this make stupid look good.
Why I thought that the Pauline chick was setting him up, I don't know - but it probably helps explain the low scores for an author who routinely goes with nothing but 4*. Maybe my score will help bring this up a bit but I can say I was disappointed. Too many 2* LW stories the past two weeks.
The BTB epilogue will score much higher, so you might start writing the outline now
And that's why men, you don't trust women.
Men don't 'unburden'. Men take advantage of it, and of course women will.
I not only didn't buy Pauline's crap excuse for his wife....I simply wouldn't care.
She lied to her husband, had inappropriate dancing with a younger guy, and was making out with him in a car.
That's enough reason for divorce. Even if he's gonna be a beta bitch about it, he should at LEAST make out with a hot chick in a back seat of a car....cuz "it's not a big deal"
And let's not forget that his wife was gaslighting him before he produced the pictures of her. THAT is actually enough disrespect to toss that bitch to the streets.
Since that night she has gone out with the 'girls' every Thursday evening.
Friday at work I thought about what I should do.
Buckskins was a country/western bar that had bands on Friday and Saturday nights.
I was going to shut him down once and for all next week, but now I'll just do it at work tomorrow.
Sorority sisters are forever and will always have each other's back.
Not wanting to sound like a bummer, but i the went to college and were sorority sisters, I would assume (bad word) that they would have jobs that were Monday thru Friday, why would she be going in on Saturday?
I hope hubby has a big gun when he confronts his three targets. I see jpb is still a cuck and still writes like one.
Oh my. Great little story from a fertile mind. Just what I have come to expect from JPB.
She was in that front seat for waaay to long for that story to work out, part two and wifey crashes and burns?
I have read many stories of yours... and maybe because of where I am in my relationship... I hate that Cora gets away with cheating. Thank you for continuing to write...
Good twist at the end. I thought you'd messed up by giving the blue balls story away. That damn Pauline is forever giving poor Bob the shaft.
Great writing as usual, only thing that stopped star 5 was the BITCH won again. That's almost as bad as a Cuck story. I did do 4 though
sucks that Bob was the one who stays suckered. Would have liked to see a post-script where someone enlightens Bob as a counter to her counter.
JPB runs hot and cold. I read him, but not cared for many of his stories, but appreciated his versatility and vision of seeing two sides to issues.
I am now through with him.
I enjoy Literotica and over time have come to appreciate two recurring characters who have appeared in stories from several authors, Sally Hawk and Pauline French. While French has been rather fickle, she had an innate appeal, at least to me she did. JPB has ruined her with this story, and has ruined me with her character. One point or whatever, sorry there is no “ZERO” rating.
So long Bob, you douchebag.
BOB you sure know how to screw a good story// I like it but you should continue as I am sure Cora will find others in more of your tales .. THANKS
I know it's not your style, but please do a follow-up where upon Bob "catches" her and we have a classic BTB!!
Please let Bob find out, kick this whore to the curb and cut off 5 of Brad's inches.
I like this one. It shows sometimes it just doesn't go as you plan. It is close to real life.
It does leave room for a really good BTB follow-up for those of us who like the cheater to get burned. However, that is just my opinion.
Keep writing.
Yeah...no self respecting husband cares if she's trying to teach "someone a lesson" you put your lips and attention on another man. Then fuck you from then on...
Sometimes you get the bear. Sometimes the bear gets you.
All’s fair in Love and War.
Nice use of Pauline French
Great story. I guess we need to add lie detectors to the wrong spouses toolkit to find out about cheating, and of course have a pre-nup that penalizes cheating except in the case of rape (and yes that would require police report and hospital visit). I also sincerely hope Karma hits both these women - like a fully loaded 18 wheeler going 80 miles per hour! It would be very interesting if Cora turned up pregnant, and Bob insisted on a paternity test (should be automatic/mandatory these days) and low and behold the child wasn't his.
I was just thinking about JPB when I saw a story called Harry in VA. A couple stories later and a new Bob! Thanks for the tale!
somewhere east of Omaha
Oh, Bob! PUH-LEEESE tell me there is a sequel/chp. 2 in the works. This is too good to stop now.
Oh Bob, you’re going to get hammered for this one! Congratulations, have a beer on me while you’re reading the comments and laughing your ass off. I gave you 5*’s if for no other reason than how much you are going to raise the hyenas’ blood pressure!
A technical 5 stars - as always a great story-telling voice, great pace and believable. I liked it even though I disliked and resent the wife's behavior!
It is so unlike you to have a story where you help the woman cheat. Not a fan of this one.
Welp i thoroughly hate it but shit like this happens all the time. Its sucks but thats how life is, most of the time cheaters get off scott free.
He WILL find out. Cheaters ALWAYS fuck up some way. It may take a while but it will happen.
I would love to see a part 2 where she gets caught, after thinking her husband is dumb she will find out he aint stupid after all
Another dummy husband....WTF can there please be more atleast a bit smart husbands in these stories?